1. 藤原の進捗
  2. ネームを直すということ
2024-01-12 16:46

ネームを直すということ

ネームの進捗報告、今回はネーム直しについて四苦八苦しながら説明しています。全然伝わる気がしない。
これをアップしようと準備しているタイミングで担当さんからネーム直しのお返事があり、無事完成となりました。わーい!

そして私としては初めて、LISTENへの機能要望というか、こういうの欲しいな話をしています。

#声日記 #進捗報告
 

Summary

最近の声日記の進捗についてお話しします。1月6日のライブストリーム以降、約1週間が経過しました。作品の世界設定やキャラクターの説明は、言葉よりも背景や小物などのシンプルな演出が重要です。ネームを修正することについて考え、最後まで完全な形でまとめたいと思います。また、自己紹介音声エピソードをプロフィールページに固定できる機能の要望についてもお話しします。自己紹介エピソードを作成し、プロフィールやカテゴリを活用してストリーマーを見つけやすくすることを考えています。

声日記の修正と追加
January 12th, 2024, this is 藤原ヒロ.
I am going to talk about the progress of my voice diary.
My last live stream was on January 6th, so it's been about a week.
During the live stream, I sent a draft of my voice diary to the editor.
After that, I sent another draft of my voice diary.
I added 4 pages to my voice diary at the end of the year.
After that, I didn't increase the number of pages.
Normally, the number of pages is fixed.
In the case of voice diaries, the number of pages is fixed.
But in the case of e-books, the number of pages is fixed.
In my case, the number of pages is fixed.
So I often fixed the number of pages.
I don't think I've ever had to add 4 pages.
声日記の記録スタイルについて
This time, I thought it would be more effective if I added a scene where the character's emotions are excited.
There is an episode in the explanation that I think is necessary for the progression of the story.
I think it would be better to add a scene where the character is excited without relying on the lines.
I think it's very deep to fix the name.
It's a series of choices of what to cut out and which to throw away.
If you're not a manga artist, you probably won't get the hang of it.
I'm going to compare it to a voice diary.
I think the style of voice diaries is to talk about something that happened that day.
I think each person has their own way of cutting out that day.
Some people talk about what actually happened.
Some people record their emotions rather than concrete facts.
I think each person has their own way of talking and recording.
I think each person has their own way of recording.
I don't think it's a natural way of directing.
I think it's more about personality.
各人の話し方や記録方法の個性
I'm not sure if this explanation is well conveyed.
For example, I don't think you can read a day's schedule of a person who has a voice diary.
I don't think you can read a day's schedule of a person who has a voice diary.
In short, I think it's fun to see how each person cuts out an episode,
how they expand it, and how they talk about it.
In manga, the synopsis and plot are just a series of facts
I think it's a good example of how to direct it and make it look like you want to convey it.
I don't think this is an example of a voice diary.
Please forgive me.
For example, this is a voice diary.
Even in the evening, I was in trouble because I didn't have any ingredients to cook without finishing my work.
Fortunately, a friend came to help me and I was able to make it to dinner.
The menu was homemade beef stew and bread from a famous store.
There was even a fruit salad for dinner.
Thanks to that, I was able to finish my work in the middle of the night, and I was very satisfied.
Even if there was a voice diary like that, I'll try to direct it differently.
I really gave up.
There's no way I can make it.
I'm going to have a hard time again.
But can you believe it?
It's God.
I can only think of her as a goddess of happiness.
How happy I am.
This was the best night of my life.
I really gave up.
I'm going to try to direct it like that.
Even if it's the same thing, I think there's a difference in the way you explain it.
I haven't talked about the voice diary I talked about later in detail, but I think it conveys a lot of emotions.
It's not a lot of information, but it conveys a lot of emotions.
As far as I'm concerned, it's a boy's manga.
It's a boy's manga that conveys emotions to a certain extent, but it also contains a lot of information.
The more I create a world setting, the more I want the reader to understand the setting.
ネームを直す前の説明
I want to explain it.
This world is like this.
In this situation, this character is like this.
If you don't understand it, you'll misunderstand it, right?
But what I'm drawing right now is a girl's manga.
Rather than explaining it in words, I think it's important to keep the character's lines simple, such as the background, accessories, composition, and character movements.
So before I fix the name, I often explain everything clearly.
For example, the menu is like beef stew and bread.
I can imagine the information in detail, so it's important, right?
I think about it and draw it.
But if you know the big flow, there's a lot of unnecessary information.
It's not that beef stew and bread are important, but it's about how much emotion you have.
ネームを直す
If that's more important, there's no need for a menu.
I think it's an interesting and easy-to-read way for a manga to reduce that and create a high level of emotion.
So even if you think you've done it once, you need to cut down on unnecessary things to create a flow that's easier for the reader to empathize with.
It's also a point that you can't notice right away unless there's someone else reading and judging.
That's why I think it's important to have someone in charge.
I think I need all the information, so if I'm not told that I don't need it, I'm like,
Is that so? I think it's necessary, but let's think about it.
It's a great opportunity.
It's something that can't be pointed out or rethought by others.
So I'm rethinking the process of cutting down unnecessary things, adding unnecessary things, and so on.
So I'm rethinking it now, but it's getting pretty close to completion.
I'm going to talk about what I'm writing about and where I'm going to announce it.
It's an episode where you have to register for the lesson and listen to it unless you follow my voice diary.
編集部との関係
The relationship between the editing department and the writer is a delicate topic.
I can't help but talk about it in an environment that's a little too much.
It's just my personal case, but I'm going to talk about how I'm communicating with the editing department.
And this is a completely different story from the progress of the manga.
I'm going to talk about the lesson.
It's a topic that's been talked about a lot in the voice diary.
It's a request, or a request to say,
I wish I had a function like this.
It's been released relatively easily.
I just came up with it.
I just thought it would be nice to have something like this.
I'd like to talk about it.
What I wanted was a self-introduction voice episode that could be fixed on the profile page.
I think there were some voices saying that they wanted to be able to fix the self-introduction episode.
What I want is not a program, but a streamer's profile page.
I think there's a page where you can see what kind of program you're on.
It's not a program, it's a person's profile page.
自己紹介エピソードとプロフィールの活用
It's a self-introduction episode that can be fixed there.
It can be a self-introduction of what kind of program you're on and what kind of content you're talking about.
I thought it would be easy for me to find a streamer I liked if I prepared an episode like that.
It's easy to zap.
If possible, I want to be able to hear a lot of people's voices.
It's not a long episode, but it's a 10-minute episode with a limit.
It's like a profile.
The voice of the profile is hashtag or separate.
If you prepare a place where you can easily find a streamer you want to listen to,
The first person who comes to the lesson will be able to hear what kind of person is talking about.
I don't know if it's going to be like that.
I thought it might be okay to have categories.
I think there are voices of men and women.
I don't know if young people or seniors are good.
I think it's up to the listener's needs.
I don't think there's much to do to get listeners to listen to the streamer.
I don't think there's much way to appeal to people other than using hashtags or cover art.
I don't want to advertise it on other SNS.
I think there are a lot of people who want to stand out on the page of the lesson.
I think everyone edits their SNS profiles.
You can easily create a profile with a voice and post it on your profile page.
プロフィールを工夫したユーザビリティ向上の提案
I think it would be nice to have a function that allows you to listen to it in a horizontal connection.
I thought I'd listen to it in a way that I might like.
I don't know if I should listen to the program from the beginning or the latest one.
I thought it would be convenient to have a function that allows you to find things that are easy to find when you're looking for a new discovery.
That's it for today.
I'm waiting for an answer to the name correction, so I'm going to do something else.
See you later.
16:46

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